A letter
to Chris
Dear Chris,
Hey man! It’s so cool
here! You don’t know what you’re missing out on! I’ve got my own little cosy,
comfy den here. I took lots of things from home so I’m not short of money or
anything.
I’ve made loads of
friends here but don’t worry you will always be my best friend. It’s so
peaceful here! I don’t have school anymore so I normally just chill at home or
play with my friends. But the best thing is that there’s no Mum or Dad to boss
me about or tell me what to do. But it can get a lonely at times. Oh, I can’t
lie to you. I’m just gonna tell the truth. I haven’t really made tons of
friends and I don’t have that much money. My house isn’t really a den, it’s
just a cardboard box that’s just about big enough for me to crouch in. It’s
freezing out here! You can notice my shaky handwriting. It’s because my fingers
have gone numb by the cold. As for food, I have to go scavenging at night but I
do still have a carton of milk.
The only reason I left
was because of Mum always going out and coming back a week later. It was also
because of my Dad who always went out drinking. When he came home at midnight
he would be drunk and he would hit us all, even Mum. I just had to escape from
all that torture and this was the only option I had.
Well, I’ve got to go
now. It’s the middle of the night and I have to go somewhere tomorrow.
Bye,
From your best friend,
Shane.
well done you included informal language and you used good reasons of why you left home but my wish is that you could add abit more feelings and emotions about when you left home.
ReplyDeleteit is good you used infomal language and had all the features of a letter
ReplyDeletei like your letter.It clearly shows why you left home
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