Heaven!!!!
Salty scents hang in
the air, wafting further on, invading the fresh stifling air, in the Caribbean.
Repeatedly somersaulting, the waves refused to roll contently on to the damp
golden sand. Birds and creatures, didn’t enjoy the beating rays of the glowing
sun. Still as can be, the waves did not accept the greeting of the dry sand,
ready to be cooled.
star - good use of vocabulary
ReplyDeletewish - could make it a bit longer