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Monday, 11 March 2013

0 Anisah's Work


THE BEACH

 

On a stifling summer’s day, a day at the beach would make you feel relaxed and breaks the tension out of your shoulders. The serene beach is full of many luscious green palm trees, which can shade you if you are huddled underneath it.

 

Sand as golden as the sun, flows freely through your fingers. Smooth, soft and silky to touch. The sand looks like salt only it is a crisp gold colour.

 

Ocean, a turquoise blue colour which is almost as bright as the sapphire blue sky. The best about the beach is its all you could hope for, it’s where you belong. The sounds of seagulls, the phenomenal scenery and the savoury taste of delicious coconut milk.

 

 

By Anisah

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