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Monday, 11 March 2013

5 Yameen's Work 11.03.13

The Monster

Save me written in blood casted on the walls but now I was reluctant to move forward, not knowing what horror lay ahead of me. Isolated, I still made the decision to furtively sneak forward .Half of me wanted me to fall back although the other was eager to unravel all these mysteries. Consequently, by making the decision, I saw what no man will ever want to see. Dead bodies, the blood was dried up, their clothes were ripped and scars covered their bodies like a blanket. Looked more like zombies to me. With the zombies putting me off I crept forward. AHH! It echoed through the tunnel as I tripped over the dead bodies. Getting up, I started to dread being here. I felt like somebody had their eyes fixed on me, I looked right, left, behind and up. I saw something. Run, Run, Run. I said in my head. So I did but then I reached a dead end .Turned then saw the beady yellow eyes…

Monday, 4 March 2013

3 Yameen's Work 04.03.13

Way home

As darkness transformed into light, Shane awoke with Whiskets carefully listening amongst the bird’s serene song. Thinking it was a beautiful day, Shane decided to take a stroll in the busy city with his one and only friend BestCat.

Shane was famished. Looking for the girl he saw yesterday, Shane became distracted staring at the green Jag they set out today. Vroom, vroom the engine roared but while this happened Madcat ran away.

Not giving up faith, Shane was still determined to find the only thing that mattered to him in the world. Shane handing out leaflets of his cat but he heard something “meow” a cat screeched painfully.

Running around like a madman Shane tried to follow the sound from place to place. Not knowing the gang was there Shane turned into a dark alleyway. “Hello Shane”.

This time there were only two gang members there, Raul and Menéndez. Raul was holding Catlegs as well as disgorging oil no him whilst Menendez grabbed Shane and told him to call his otherwise his cat will be flamed. Shane did what they told him to do but they still got out a match and a gun. Shane’s dad answered “hello”.