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Monday, 11 March 2013

1 Ali's Work 11.03.13


Green backed spider  

 

Have you ever heard about the green backed spider? Well you shouldn’t have because this endangered specie was last discovered over hundreds of years ago. However it was rediscovered in 1993 by Mr Arachnid Green (the famous scientist of spiders.) Over that period millions of these spiders have become extinct. These tiny species were endangered for their solid webs.

 

Recently, it was found in the trees of the amazon rainforest in Brazil. If this spider ever comes before you, be careful as it hates human presence. It poisons leaves that we get our medicine from. It is really hard to see the green backed spider as they camouflage on trees. Don’t ever come near it by mistake as it spurts out poison which can kill you. Help to prevent deforestation from increasing as not only it affects our breathing but extincts spiders vigorously. It likes to suck out blood out from a human body. Its food chain is from an ant to a fish. Although it weighs the same as a fifty pence coin it carries the strength of a tiger.

 

We should contribute from our side and pull people to this great deed we are forming. Are you ready to help this specie that these incredible beasts will stoop from extinction? With your contribution we ensure you that these incredible beasts will stop coming on the verge of elimination.        

 

Monday, 4 March 2013

1 Ali's Work 04.03.13




 

 

Dear diary,

 

I can’t believe what a disgraceful thing I’ve

done! I have murdered my own blood. King Duncan had been brutally killed by me, his own

Cousin. I am emotionally drained with regret.

I wish to die myself after committing such an
unforgivable sin. Why did I listen to the witches prophecy and lady Macbeth? Why?

 

When my dagger travelled into the king’s stomach my whole body froze with fright.

I am treated as a filthy old man by the people of

Scotland. Everyone wants me dead. Have I become that greedy to kill a member of my family just to be on the throne? I’m consumed

With guilt and fear, I find it difficult to sleep when I think about that treacherous moment when my cousin’s body was smeared all over with blood. I always get the feeling that I’m being haunted by my cousins ghost.  

 

 

 

 

Tuesday, 16 October 2012

2 Ali's Work



This is a diary entry on an Egyptian farmer doing his daily duties.
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