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Monday, 11 March 2013

0 Selma's Work 11.03.13


            The Green Backed Spider

 

 

Have you ever heard about the Green Backed Spider? If not, you have come to the right place. Recently, a scientist has discovered a strange looking spider, which has been around since the Jurassic period. It has been confirmed that there are not many of them left, which means they are very close to becoming extinct.

 

The Green Backed Spider has black 8 legs; all of which are black and green stripes. If you ever discover a Green Backed Spider, beware, as it is not used to humans. Its back is a form of metal known as aluminium. Its colour tone is magical, you wouldn’t know as it camouflages in the green luscious tree. If you ever get to close it, even a meter, it automatically spits out poison to your eyes.

 

Moreover, the green Backed spider lives in the Amazon rainforest. Its favourite tree is called the ‘Trapeze tree’. The Trapeze tree is the Green Backed spiders’ favourite tree, which is known to it as its home. The Trapeze tree is 20m tall and it diameter is 15m.WOW!

 

However, the Green Backed Spider is a herbivore, who eats fruits as well as leaves. These fruits that belong to the Green Backed Spider are called ‘swush’, they are red just like a tomato but a swush has black dots.

 

Since this discovery has been made a herd of organised criminal have desended to the Amazon Rainforest in search of the Green Backed Spider. It’s value is astronomical because of the spinning web. Also, the Trapeze tree have been cut off for its mouth-watering swush and beautiful leaves.

 

We need to make sure that we contribute and inform others for the benefit of this creature. With your support and encouragement we can prevent this happening. To salvage the spider the race must insure that we should plant at least 4 more Trapeze tree in replace of one.

 

      

 

Monday, 4 March 2013

8 Selma's Work 04.03.13


                                       Charity Choice

 

 

Dear fellow students of South Park Primary School.

My name is Emily Lopez, and I am here today to persuade and encourage you to choose my charity called ‘Somalia need water!’ I am sure that you have heard that children are suffering from Civil War and water.

 

Surly you must agree, that 70% of the water in Somalia is infected by waste, urine and dirt. It’s essential for them to have clean water as you are filled with them at home! Do you want this on your conscience? Why not help these poor children? In Somalia it is 50 degrees hot which will show that the water in the lakes and rivers will dry out. By you putting in the well you will be on a grave with your name on it, and children in Somalia will be proud of you. Even though its £200,000, it will be a life time investment for children in the future. These children deserve to have rights as we are blessed and they are unfortunate. If you participate in this charity event you will receive a goody badge with a large pack of chocolates and sweets.

 

This is a once in a life time opportunity! Make the right choice! Do you want this to be on your mind? Then stop this enduring by doing your bit! Undoubtly this is the best charity choice you have seen. So make your vote count! Contribute in this charity event!         

Thursday, 18 October 2012

1 Selma's Work



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