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Showing posts with label Priyen's Work. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Priyen's Work. Show all posts

Monday, 18 March 2013

0 Priyen's Work 18.03.13


  The Mangee

 

Eyes like flames pierced out in the semi-darkness. There was tormenting sounds that were haunting my delicate ear drums. The sewage water was cascading down the temple walls, the odours were lingering away in my nostrils. There were tally marks engraved deep down into the concrete walls. The merciless Mangee will tear you up limb by limb he will eat your raw flesh I could touch the sticky slimy walls .I got a taste of water it trickled down my face and into my mouth ugh it was disgusting it tastes like rotten corpes.

Monday, 4 March 2013

3 Priyen's Work 04.03.13


 

 

CHARITY CHOICE
 

WWF
 

Dear fellow students,


I am here to in courage you to save these astonishing creatures the panda bear. This is based in Chinas’ rainforest.  In addition to the previous text I am telling that this is very fundamental otherwise these amazing animals will be wiped out and slowly become extinct. This is an investment for life pandas could still be here. Pandas are diminishing very quickly!

 

In 1999 there were (1,500) pandas but now you will think I’m fibbing but there are only (16pandas left). “Surely you must agree your contribution will make a great lifelong investment,” it can make a difference to their frightening life.


 

Will you help? “Statistics show that 80 % of the world’s pandas are gone”

PLEASE JUST PAY£2.00 A MONTH. You will receive a small adoption pack of the panda bear you will get a small picture of the panda that you have changed the life for.

 

“HELP NOW!” or say good bye please please help. Leave your foot print on its heart otherwise this creature will disappear. Give a little receive a lot.  

Thursday, 18 October 2012

0 Priyen's Work


This is a diary entry on an Egyptian farmer doing his daily duties.
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