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Showing posts with label Georgia's Work. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Georgia's Work. Show all posts

Monday, 18 March 2013

0 Georgia's Work 18.03.13


 

 

HOWL
 



 

 


Shaking, my petrified body was tortured with tormenting fear. As I heroically attempted to turn the corroded, ice-cold handle, a bead of damp sweat slowly trickled down my red hot neck. It was here. It was coming for ME!

 

As frightened as a coward, I entered the deserted corps infected crypt. Gradually, my shadow became more and more and more diminiture against the hidden light, which flickered eerily from my wax candle. Suddenly, a shadowy figure towered over my fragile body.

 

 

Goose bumps invaded my body. Would I be this blood firsty Ville, viscous beast’s next helpless victim? As the beast came closer and closer and closer there was a slight breeze coming from the window.

 

 

Suddenly, as the beast approached me more and the breeze got heavier causing the wax candle to blow out……..

 

 

THE END!

Monday, 11 March 2013

0 Georgia's Work 11.03.13


The island of mystery

 

 

The island is calm peaceful and still and sometimes you catch the silly old chill.

Now its fine and nice also fun

It’s like the earth met with the sun.

The island is colourful with tropical trees

And sometimes you catch the silly bees

People have come oh finally

Because every day is a mystery.

What’s that? What’s that? Is that what I see?

The waves crashing HEAVILY!

HELP! HELP! HELP ME! It’s coming closer can’t you see.

So HELP! HELP! HELP! It’s a TUSINAMI!

Splash, splash, splash we can’t breathe everyone’s depress and full of grief

They lied they lied it’s not helping

They said this island was relaxing.

The waves look and see people dead

He thinks oh well time to go bed

SNOR! SNOR! Who is that?

The TUSINAMI never coming BACK!

 

Monday, 4 March 2013

2 Georgia's Work 04.03.13



Karate machine

 

Yesterday, Jessica Samantha Alan, who is 11 years old, broke the record for taking on 100 karate people non-stop. In addition to this event took place at Lox ford Primary School the most popular school. Jessica wanted to do this record because her brother broke the record of taking on 99 karate people so she wanted to take his place.

 

Meanwhile, reporters asked her if she was willing to say some stuff so she said that she was determent to do this and she was thrilled that she completed her objective. Furthermore, her and her family who were overwhelmed with joy, showed her how much they were proud of her by giving Jessica all their love and support.

 

Before interviewing the family we interviewed the winner herself Jessica Samantha Alan “ I am so proud of myself achieving what has taken me 2 years of practice but I was inspired by my brother”

 

 

Tuesday, 16 October 2012

0 Georgia's Work



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