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Monday, 18 March 2013

3 Femi's Work 18.03.13


 

Chasing Money

 

 

Using her pink fluffy phone, Charlotte rambled constantly. Her mouth was like numbers, NEVER ENDING! Whilst in the park, she unfortunately met David, the class geek, who was like usual carrying out an experiment ; even though he was banned, his last  test resulted in half the grass getting burned.Anyway,today was very special because as David was setting up the equipment he saw a smartly designed suitcase unattended lying on the floor. Curious, he opened it.His eyes lit up! Beads of sweat ravaged down his neck! Then his mouth went dry.                                                                                                                                         “CHARLOTTE!”                                                                                                                                                                             Covering her phone, she replied                                                                                                                                “What do you want Dorky David!”                                                                                                               Pointing at the suitcase, he stuttered                                                                                                                            “There’s money…MONEY! 500 grand!”                                                                                                                    Her mouth dropped and her eyes twitched                                                                                                                      “Did you say 500 grand 500 GRAND! Im rich, rich I tell you”                                                                                    “Your rich but I found the money, plus we have the return to the police”                                             spoke David like a girl scout.                                                                                                                                      “SHUT UP AND BE A MAN! Freak” yelled Charlotte.                                                                                                 Being red, her eyes stopped David dead as she snatched the case away.                                                                                                                                                                           

 

 

 

   

Monday, 4 March 2013

4 Femi's Work 04.03.13


Green- Backed Spider

 

Introduction

Amid the chaos of today’s life, a phenomenal and miraculous discovery has just been put into the limelight. Have you ever heard of the Green-Backed Spider? According to W.W.F (Word Wildlife Federation) this dazzling was believed to be extinct since the Ice-Age but now it has been properly introduced into 21st century.

 

Appearance and Weight

Covered in indestructible hot molten metal, this Arachnid is also enlisted with aluminium spikes across it’s limbs. Also striking fear into it’s prey, with it’s red retro skin, black eyes and slimy green back. Using it’s body hair I can detect any body heat within a range of 10m.Weighing 2 tonnes he is the WEIGHT OF AN ELEPHANT!

 

Prey and hunting technique

Preying on fish, in the frosty Artic Circle, it melts ice and jabs the fish in the brain, stunning the fish instantly. Then it liquefies the fish with it’s acid urine.


Habitat

Roaming in the North Pole, the spider is a vagabond, sleeping anywhere in it’s handmade hammock, made by it spinning a impenetrable thread, which can hold 500 tonnes.

 

Closing

Sadly, the spider is an SEVERLY ENDANGERED SPECIES! With only fewer than 100 left. Due to the loss of ice and illegal hunting of it’s metal, this creature will be entirely extinct  by 2050. But with your support we can reduce our carbon footprint, stop the loss and tackle the illegal trade of it’s metal.

 

 

 

 

1 Femi's Work 04.03.13


  (Scene 4-banquet scene)

Int-Glamis Castle

 

Narrator 4: (speaks mystically)

Prophecy has become truth, witches foretell the truth

Narrator 5: Macbeth is troubled by this, for his children will not be kings, Banquo wills

(Mists sets into the air)

Macbeth: (thinks)

I cannot allow let Banquo descendants rule Scotland, mine will, I must get rid of him and Fleance

Narrator 6: A great banquet is organised in Macbeth’s name, all nobility are invited. Including Banquo and Fleance

Int-the King’s bedchambers

Banquo: Im sorry Macbeth, I really am...But Fleance and I are going out ridding

(Macbeth smiles)

Macbeth :( thinks)

You’ve given me the opportunity I wanted

Ext-In the woods

Narrator 7: As Banquo rode along with son, he is uneasy, he keeps thinks about the witches tell the future

Banquo :( thinks)

 What if Macbeth tries to kill me, there are rumours he circulating that he helped kill the king!

(Horses neigh)

(Branches twitches)

Fleance :( speaks to the horse)

What wrong old girl?

(Fleance strokes the horse)

Int-the king’s bedchambers

(Macbeth turns towards one of his guards)

 

Macbeth :( coldly)

Have your friend caught up with him, you better make sure they kill Banquo

Guard 1: Of course, sire

Ext-Back in the woods

Narrator 8: Fleance fleas in fear as his father has just been murdered

Int-Meanwhile in the Banquet

(Music begins)

(Macbeth walks in along with his wife)

(Everyone bows)

Everyone: All hail the King, long live the King! All hail the Queen, long live the Queen!

(As Macbeth walks towards his chair, he sees something that startles him)

(Pointing to the chair)

Macbeth :( stutters)

Is that you Banquo, you’re... You’re dead I never killed you, why do you taunt me!

Banquo ghost: You will suffer, your children will never being

Lord Ross: Is something wrong, my lord, can I help you?

(Silence is in the air)

Lady Macbeth: Im sorry, my husband is very ill, please can everyone leave

Lord Ross: Of course, sire

(Lady Macbeth grabs her husband)

Lady Macbeth :( angrily)

Pull yourself together!

 

 

 

 

 

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