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Showing posts with label Amna's Work. Show all posts
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Monday, 18 March 2013

2 Amna's Work 18.03.13


Write a missing chapter!

 

The following day Bradley jumped in excitement for it was D-day! He couldn’t wait until they got on the coach and arrived in the Science Museum. Pushing everyone, Bradley hurried towards Mrs Ebbel. ”When are we going? “Bradley shouted, stomping his feet until the floor shook. But Mrs Ebbel paid no attention to Bradley and did a headcount instead. Behind him Jeff and his friends. Immediately, Jeff and his friends started to whisper and then Bradley overheard their conversation and soon his face gradually became a brighter shade of red. Mortified, Bradley darted out of his seat then his eyes fitted at Jeff. Jeff approached him, and pushed his fist in front of Bradley’s chest. BANG! Bradley double overed but quickly backfired with the same action whilst Mrs Ebbel was glaring at him. Brian, Jeff, Robbie and Andy pushed and told Mrs Ebbel one of the biggest lie ever. It began by Jeff...”Mrs Ebbel, Bradley punched me! All we were doing were talking secretly. You should tell him to go to the principal’s office.“Why? “answered Mrs Ebbel

“Because” “NO any way you are NOT going to the science museum I’m sorry!”

Bradley went back in distraught into Carla’s office but she did not seem to be there!

By Amna

Monday, 11 March 2013

2 Amna's Work 11.03.13


The Green backed spider:

 

 

How much do you know about the Arachnid family? Well Dr Montgomery (a scientist) has made a miraculous discovery and has found out that these endangered species are still living from back thousands of years ago. The discovery, by Dr Montgomery was believed to be of the Green backed spider.

 

Why the green backed spiders are endangered?

These rare spiders are endangered because of deforestation in Peru (where it lives) however not all of these species are wiped out. These spiders are just at the brink of extinction. Fortunately the Green backed spider has not yet been extinct. These endangered spiders are also having no food so may become extinct due to this.

 

Where it lives? 

The green backed spider is believed to be found in Peru where Dr Montgomery was going for his expedition for this rare spider. He had found these spiders in the Frenza tree, which probably 8m tall so it is out of reach for predators. The spider itself is about the side of a tarantula. The diameter of the tree was known as 3m long. It lives there because of the fresh luscious green leaves, where it can camouflage.      

 

What it looks like?

If you ever come across the green backed spiders it should have 8 legs, which are razor sharp legs, so if you’re scared of spiders let me tell you if you try to illuminate the legs they’ll just regrow also it should have 4 teeth to eats its prey. Furthermore the green backed spider enjoys to eat scrumptious oil from the saps of the leaves and delicious fruit named chiki chiki. Local people there try to grab it but the spider guards it. It feed on small ants and insects, smaller than itself.

 

People should prevent deforestation, as it is not only bad for our oxygen levels but for the spiders too. Deforestation is happening rigorously and should stop.

Monday, 4 March 2013

3 Amna's Work 04.03.13


Charity choice:


 

The charity I think will be suitable will be for Water Aid! I think it is quite necessary for us to help the people of Africa. These poor people with no water, how will they survive? I’m here standing, but over there they won’t be.

20,000 people, not only in Africa but in other places die every minute, in fact every second. Surely you must agree that if you watch television then you’ve seen the charity, Water Aid! A recent survey from the same charity found out that 77%of people in Africa have no water. Bring some conscious to yourself and help if you care! Imagine you’re in their shoes. How would you feel to have no water? But think, when the children actually find some water they find out it’s dirty, they drink it. Why don’t you try to stop this, by doing your bit?


Don’t you think your contribution will make a difference, well I do!  I’m sure this will bring some attention to you. This is extremely fundamental don’t you think? Make the right choice!!! 

By Amna Bhatti