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Showing posts with label Abhinov. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Abhinov. Show all posts

Wednesday, 2 April 2014

To whom it may concern,

I am a local pupil residing near Water Lane and I am writing to you on behalf of South Park Primary School, regarding the renovation of the wasteland. It takes a considerate and knowledgeable man, as yourself,  to take such a vast step to take my opinion. A man who lives up to your cavalier and withholds such a high position of authority, should perceive the benefits of reconstructing the barren land to become a local park.


First and foremost, numerous accidents occur with children, as recent statistics show that there has been a major increase of seventy per cent in road car accidents. I believe that this is a non-negotiable decision, as a park is crucial for the community as the closest local park is approximately 10 miles away, where will the youth socialise? Or stimulate their minds from their hectic schedule? Most significantly, I have surveyed 50 parents and 95% of them agreed, that it is unsafe for children to frolic unsupervised and have also mentioned constructing a park with plain fields. The welfare of the youth depends on your decision.


Moreover, there is lack of exercise, as there has been 40% increase in obesity in children and due to the fact that there is no garden either as we dwell in high rise flats. England is way ahead in obesity compared to our European neighbours ( 35% increase). 60% of children spend invaluable time on gaming consoles when it is perfect to spend it in a peaceful area. In my experience , I think that the majority of residents would prefer a park. We are very unfortunate and need an immediate construction, we need a place to socialise.


If you have any issues with constructing this 24 acre field, then please note that we are helpless children with no place to show our social skills. A rising trend of 30% increase of overweight children over the age of 5 has increased. Physical education is a huge part of the government curriculum, and a nearby park will increase the amount of exercise they do. Burning calories is essential as being weighty has several disadvantages, it is going to be advantageous and if you approve, without dispute, it will help generations to come. As you are aware, the youth club fees are beyond the payable price for our underpaid parents. Our school would desire a safe, calm and amusing area which would shed some light on this problematic situation.


I hope you take this letter into consideration as it has been a strainous task to get the approval of the residents living in my locality. I hope you understand that this is a necessity and it is absolutely essential of the construction to occur and that it could save lives or it will be mundane, boring , and very uninteresting.

Yours faithfully,
          Abhinov Dey

Friday, 7 February 2014

3 Wreck of the Zanzibar-letter

Dear Billy, It's Laura (Your Laura) and I am writing to you regarding your subsequent departure. I was flabbergasted when I received your detailed account of America, and how it is a very fast growing country, you had absolutely left me in awe when you spoke of the clothing the witty Americans wear. I ponder deeply about your progress there and how successful you could become like an entrepreneur. It is extraordinary that a youthful boy, like you, can sail on a seven masted voyage to a picturesque country. If you ever reply, please inform me of your occupation.

A burden has struck our family and has devastated our atmosphere. Mother is heart-broken, as she lies in bed clutching your blue jersey and rocking back and forth crying. Surprisingly, father was really demoralised because he couldn't rectify his woeful mistakes. This is very peculiar because most of the cows aren't milking properly, and the only source we could find was your departure. Our mood has been very somber and a tragic drought caused our island to collapse. It has caused rubble to pile up, Billy, we are extremely depressed and very desperate as it has been really chaotic without you as our monthly income has been eradicated because now all our cows have died. I beg you to arrive as soon as you can because at least it would shed some light on us as we have to move out.

Alas, I hope you enlighten our mood by coming back and embracing us. It feels like a prison without you. I Hope you come back, I vow as long as I live for you.

Lots of love,

Laura. P

0 Play script-Macbeth

Scene 5-Banquet Scene
(Inside Glamis Castle)

Narrator 5: As the three hideous hags had prohecised Macbeth's bright future, Macbeth has tasted power and he wanted to possess this for eternity. He became irate because he knew that his loyal friend's sons were going to be the next monarch. Temptation got the best of him, and finally decided to do the unforgivable, as he was uneasy knowing that his descendants wouldn't inherit the throne

Banquo: I think I shall go out for riding on my stallion, as thou know that it is most beautiful today.

Macbeth: I request my loyal comrade to rejoice on this wondrous occasion , alas I would advise you to arrive at the earliest Banquo, I shall require you later.

 (with a sly grin on his face)

Narrator 6: Macbeth's devious plan was to attack him when he was at his weakest. Although Macbeth had guilt in his heart, he decided to pursue his act.

Madeline: (In a courteous manner) The deed has been done sire, Banquo's throat has been slit and we have concealed his corpse.

(Royal trumpets bellowing and music starts playing)

Macbeth: I am proud to announce that I, as the king of Scotland, am most pleased with this jovial day before my grand coronation.

(Sips his wine from the goblet)

Narrator 5: Banquo, his solemn advisor, his solemn friend,and his solemn partner... DEAD!

Madeline: Macbeth, I have heard terrible news, Fleance, Banquo's son has escaped, unharmed.

 (Macbeth nudging her aside)
Macbeth: (Angirly telling her off) Wha...? What...is this?! Impossible! I! I had sent them to kill you!