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Showing posts with label Isma's Work. Show all posts
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Monday, 11 March 2013

1 Isma's Work 11.03.13


THE RAGING SEA!!

 

Destructively devouring onto the golden sand,

The waves are soaring,

 

Grinding everything like a crusher, the waves are horrifyingly bashing!

 

BANG, SPLASH,
 
 The Sea is crashing!!


 

Thrashing thunderously!

 

It’s a cheetah sprinting, destroying it can find on its path ferociously!

 

It’s a poisonous python spreading venom through the land!

 Now everything belongs in her hands!

 

Crashing, tumbling, its feeling angry as the waves rage in dread!

 

Houses, humans, they’re all dead!!

Thursday, 18 October 2012

2 Isma's Work














This is a diary entry on an Egyptian farmer doing his daily duties.
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