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Showing posts with label Ismail's Work. Show all posts
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Monday, 18 March 2013

0 Ismail's Work 18.03.13


Dear Harriet,

 

I am writing to you to explain about this irresponsible accident which had happened recently. Firstly, I would like to inform you that this was a complete mistake. It isn’t what you think it is I didn’t do it. Well on the other hand I did do it. But it was an accident I swear on my mother’s life. Why would I even attended to do something as ungrateful as this. I know you might be thinking why did this even take place well let me tell you that.

Monday, 11 March 2013

7 Ismail's Work 11.03.13


A short story


An hour later, the mischievous figure named Shane woke with a fright to discover that his beloved kitty cat had gone missing. “Here Whisket, here what have I done?” remarked Shane melancholy, “plus I have no food to eat.” Feeling remorseful Shane roamed around the bustling city trying to find his cat (and of cause some food). As he walked, the weather was abysmal and somehow it made the city rather sinister. Shane was quite a timid child in all his life although he was really apprehensive about being there. Before very long, Shane had realised he was feeling extremely ravenous so he decided to shoplift even though, he knew it was the wrong thing to do! As soon as he got in to the shop he made a plan. Carefully he quickly grabbed an item and placed it inside his hoody. Just as he left the supermarket he heard some sort of loud sound go off. “What on earth could that be? “Shane question anxiously. Before he knew it a security guard appeared. “Hey you come back here!” the guard shouted firmly. Shane ran for his life with a heart beating wildly as if it was shot to death.


Thursday, 18 October 2012

0 Ismail's Work

 
This is a diary entry on an Egyptian farmer doing his daily duties.
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