An hour later, the mischievous figure named Shane woke with a fright to discover that his beloved kitty cat had gone missing. “Here Whisket, here what have I done?” remarked Shane melancholy, “plus I have no food to eat.” Feeling remorseful Shane roamed around the bustling city trying to find his cat (and of cause some food). As he walked, the weather was abysmal and somehow it made the city rather sinister. Shane was quite a timid child in all his life although he was really apprehensive about being there. Before very long, Shane had realised he was feeling extremely ravenous so he decided to shoplift even though, he knew it was the wrong thing to do! As soon as he got in to the shop he made a plan. Carefully he quickly grabbed an item and placed it inside his hoody. Just as he left the supermarket he heard some sort of loud sound go off. “What on earth could that be? “Shane question anxiously. Before he knew it a security guard appeared. “Hey you come back here!” the guard shouted firmly. Shane ran for his life with a heart beating wildly as if it was shot to death.
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