=>3500 Eiger: Hasnaat's Work 11.03.13

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Monday, 11 March 2013

0 Hasnaat's Work 11.03.13


The Monster

Darkness surrounded me. I could feel blood starting to stop circulating. Cold and damp, my hand started to fiddle with a revolting cobweb. Suddenly, my phobia for spiders began to haunt me once more. Was it a figment of my imagination? I was isolated. Despite the freezing air, something was stifling hot around my back… Slowly, I turned around. A blood-curdling obscene roar took place in front of me! Frantic, I ran and ran even though the ghastly beast was trying to get a taste of my flesh! Meanwhile, the repulsive odour of sewage was in the middle of invading my innocent nostrils like an enraged lion chasing after it’s petrified prey. With my heart struggling for breath, I wondered if this was all my imagination playing tricks on me. Although my back was towards the ravenous monster, I could feel it’s prolific claws and lethal eyes fixated upon me waiting for me to give in to his teeth. Hoping for an escape out of this brutal calamity, the monstrous and poisonous creature an unforgettable catastrophe…

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