Eiger: Amber's Work 18.03.13

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Monday, 18 March 2013

1 Amber's Work 18.03.13

The Monster

Unaware of what lay ahead. I stopped, breathing fast. I THOUGHT I WOULD NEVER GET OUT, NEVER see my parents and eventually DIE! Still using (my now covered in slime) hands, I prayed that someone would hear my crying voice however large this cave was. Isolated, in this eerie cave, my heart pounding, I felt as if someone had walked over my grave! Dark black figures watching my every move. Is this a dream? In this gloomy calamity, I awaited my unforgettable death. Flashbacks reminding me of the good times but then a tenacious sound disrupted me.

Jumping I dared not to look behind as I realised death was close! Running would just make the creature more angry so I lay down and let the creature take me…