CHARITY
CHOICE
WWF
Dear
fellow students,
I
am here to in courage you to save these astonishing creatures the panda bear.
This is based in Chinas’ rainforest. In
addition to the previous text I am telling that this is very fundamental
otherwise these amazing animals will be wiped out and slowly become extinct. This
is an investment for life pandas could still be here. Pandas are diminishing
very quickly!
In
1999 there were (1,500) pandas but now you will think I’m fibbing but there are
only (16pandas left). “Surely you must agree your contribution will make a great
lifelong investment,” it can make a difference to their frightening life.
Will
you help? “Statistics show that 80 % of the world’s pandas are gone”
PLEASE
JUST PAY£2.00 A MONTH. You will receive a small adoption pack of the panda bear
you will get a small picture of the panda that you have changed the life for.
“HELP
NOW!” or say good bye please please help. Leave your foot print on its heart
otherwise this creature will disappear. Give a little receive a lot.
This work very nice, I liked the Statistic and the brillant words.
ReplyDeleteStar- You have used good vocabulary like fundamental.
ReplyDeleteStar- You have used different oppeners like "statistics show"
Wish- You could use more persuasive words
Execellent work u said when it happened and the date
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