=>3500 Eiger: Priyen's Work 18.03.13

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Monday, 18 March 2013

0 Priyen's Work 18.03.13


  The Mangee

 

Eyes like flames pierced out in the semi-darkness. There was tormenting sounds that were haunting my delicate ear drums. The sewage water was cascading down the temple walls, the odours were lingering away in my nostrils. There were tally marks engraved deep down into the concrete walls. The merciless Mangee will tear you up limb by limb he will eat your raw flesh I could touch the sticky slimy walls .I got a taste of water it trickled down my face and into my mouth ugh it was disgusting it tastes like rotten corpes.

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