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Monday, 4 March 2013

2 Georgia's Work 04.03.13



Karate machine

 

Yesterday, Jessica Samantha Alan, who is 11 years old, broke the record for taking on 100 karate people non-stop. In addition to this event took place at Lox ford Primary School the most popular school. Jessica wanted to do this record because her brother broke the record of taking on 99 karate people so she wanted to take his place.

 

Meanwhile, reporters asked her if she was willing to say some stuff so she said that she was determent to do this and she was thrilled that she completed her objective. Furthermore, her and her family who were overwhelmed with joy, showed her how much they were proud of her by giving Jessica all their love and support.

 

Before interviewing the family we interviewed the winner herself Jessica Samantha Alan “ I am so proud of myself achieving what has taken me 2 years of practice but I was inspired by my brother”

 

 

2 comments:

  1. @Georgia when you use speech you have to right you said it like the person

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  2. @Georgia you need more writing because this is only a little

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