Vicious was the mangee
monster; its ravenous claws sinking into the steady walls, the screams
destroying my eardrum. Couragesly I tried to escape the blood-teeming scream.
Subsequently, he could smell my juicy flesh, becoming more and more blood
thirsty, as he was approaching his target, ME! While this ravenous chase, my
heart pounded furiously. I must not forget that he is a impenetrable creature,
as I looked back its scaly skin shone under the gems in the vast temple. When I
looked into his blood-torch eyes, my blood froze like ice in the artic. I
screamed for help wildly. The view was gaunt. Blood dripping from the ceiling
covering the side walls. His horrendous breath was haunting me, my lungs were
breathing bomb gases in, I couldn’t survive any more. It was a dead end when I
was caught. My heart JUMPED as I saw the figure. The
obnoxious smell killed my noise viciously. It was inevitable that he was going
to eat me. In addition, going to chew my flesh! It was like my heart stopping
every 1 minute. I tried to escape as there was blood on the floor. I’d hit my
head. I was on the floor, saying goodbye to my body as I knew as I knew what
the consequences were. The boiling blood rushed around my body, around
600km/h……
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