=>3500 Eiger: Bilaal's Work 11.03.13

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Monday, 11 March 2013

0 Bilaal's Work 11.03.13


The monster

 

It was in front of my eyes, out of nowhere it jumped up and down as if it was happy. Suddenly, it crept towards me through glimmers of light as I took a step back it came closer! Closer! Closer! it looked at me grinning. I’m so stupid why did I listen to my friends? Look at what I’ve gotten myself into. As I turned around I could feel the untamed beast’s revolting breath emerging onto me slowly, slowly, slowly suddenly I sprinted +as fast as I could, but I could hear the beast’s claws scraping it’s dreadful claws on the walls sharpening them to annihilate me, his eyes were fixated on me as I saw an unusual figure so I turned into another alleyway but I didn’t know that the boy was my friend Chandler so I ran faster than ever but I felt the monsters disgusting breath on my back

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