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Monday, 11 March 2013

0 Georgia's Work 11.03.13


The island of mystery

 

 

The island is calm peaceful and still and sometimes you catch the silly old chill.

Now its fine and nice also fun

It’s like the earth met with the sun.

The island is colourful with tropical trees

And sometimes you catch the silly bees

People have come oh finally

Because every day is a mystery.

What’s that? What’s that? Is that what I see?

The waves crashing HEAVILY!

HELP! HELP! HELP ME! It’s coming closer can’t you see.

So HELP! HELP! HELP! It’s a TUSINAMI!

Splash, splash, splash we can’t breathe everyone’s depress and full of grief

They lied they lied it’s not helping

They said this island was relaxing.

The waves look and see people dead

He thinks oh well time to go bed

SNOR! SNOR! Who is that?

The TUSINAMI never coming BACK!

 

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