=>3500 Eiger: Lavanan's Work 18.03.13

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Monday, 18 March 2013

1 Lavanan's Work 18.03.13


      The Monster

 

Flash! Instantly paralyzed with fear, I fainted, with one glimpse of the monster itself. My frozen eyes began to thaw out, the eerie silence infected my ears. A repeated image of people I know strangled my mind, ‘don’t go there, where the monster lurks, don’t go down there where horror lurks,’ they had told me. I turned my head still lying on the floor like a prisoner by one single glance at that sinister creature. Was it a figment of my imagination?

 

“Hello, is anyone there?” I panicked with a sense of infinite dread within my soul. My voice echoed, piercing my own ear; I gasped in pain trying to cover my only working sense from my very own tenacious sound. Where was I? A wafting odour marched up my nostrils. I scrambled to my feet after the torture had ended. Thud! Thud! Isolated I might be, but I felt I wasn’t alone in this dungeon. My heart racing as my senses tormented me. A deafening scream filled the atmosphere surrounding me. I wasn’t the cause…

 

It came forward, I felt its dragon breath. I reached for my flashlight with struggle. Glaring painfully bright eyes fixated on me, I thought my fate was sealed. It had something in its mouth, a skeleton, a human skeleton, a past victim. A roar filled the ghastly tunnel, as loud as a meteor crash. Was this the end was it over for me? All my goals I wanted to accomplish dripped away like my trickling sweat. “My family!” A white arena appeared in front of me, signalling my death… 

 

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