THE
MONSTER!!!
An
outline of a huge dew-drop covered with running slime continuously down like a
wave going downwards. Raser-sharp claws full of dreadful venom, his eyes
pierced at me like they have caught a fire in them. Although it was far away
from me, I could feel its fearful odour invading my nostrils. Shrieking and
crying was in my head, seeing him was a huge threat.
My
own breath was touching me, it felt like it was trying to grab my flesh and
devour into me then…
AHH!!!
I found myself screaming in my bed with my dad pulling me but then all of a
sudden my dad disappeared and there I heard a slight crack from the ground…
You have used affect and lots of vocabluary.
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