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Showing posts with label Amber's Work. Show all posts
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Monday, 18 March 2013

1 Amber's Work 18.03.13


The Monster

 

 

 

Unaware of what lay ahead. I stopped, breathing fast. I THOUGHT I WOULD NEVER GET OUT, NEVER see my parents and eventually DIE! Still using (my now covered in slime) hands, I prayed that someone would hear my crying voice however large this cave was. Isolated, in this eerie cave, my heart pounding, I felt as if someone had walked over my grave! Dark black figures watching my every move. Is this a dream? In this gloomy calamity, I awaited my unforgettable death. Flashbacks reminding me of the good times but then a tenacious sound disrupted me.

 

Jumping I dared not to look behind as I realised death was close! Running would just make the creature more angry so I lay down and let the creature take me…

Monday, 4 March 2013

3 Amber's Work 04.03.13


Charity Choice

 

Dear Fellow Students of South Park,

 

My name is Amber and I am here with you today to speak about the appalling situation that many parents face. When a baby is born before being in their mother’s womb for nine months they are premature. An extensive amount of babies are born premature and need to be put in incubators for a certain amount of time because they have not been developed properly

 

However hospitals do not have enough incubators for the wide amount of premature babies. Fortunately this amazing appeal has helped thousands of babies by donating a relevant amount of money. Fundamental and exceedingly crucial, our charity could help save thousands of little lives.

 

Surely you all agree that no child was born to die! Before this charity no doctors had hope of a child surviving but now with your help our Earth could be a better place. 1990 was a year of sadness but that hopefully will be reduced to 100% no premature babies dying. Would YOU let a child die just because of a tiny amount of money YOU did not pay? I do not think so!

 

You must choose this organisation! Undoubtedly this essential commitment will put a smile over all parents face’s and will do to yours. This matter is not fair and should not happen to anyone especially the young. We fought small pox, we fought swine flu and one day we will fight the suffering of many people, young and elder. Let us embrace this love. I have said my bit now it is down to you!!!

 

Thank you

 

 

Tuesday, 16 October 2012

2 Amber's Work

 

 
This is a diary entry on an Egyptian farmer doing his daily duties.
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