Green- Backed Spider
Introduction
Amid the chaos of today’s life, a phenomenal and
miraculous discovery has just been put into the limelight. Have you ever heard
of the Green-Backed Spider? According to W.W.F (Word Wildlife Federation) this dazzling
was believed to be extinct since the Ice-Age but now it has been properly
introduced into 21st century.
Appearance
and Weight
Covered in indestructible hot molten metal, this Arachnid
is also enlisted with aluminium spikes across it’s limbs. Also striking fear
into it’s prey, with it’s red retro skin, black eyes and slimy green back.
Using it’s body hair I can detect any body heat within a range of 10m.Weighing
2 tonnes he is the WEIGHT OF AN ELEPHANT!
Prey
and hunting technique
Preying on fish, in the frosty Artic Circle, it melts ice
and jabs the fish in the brain, stunning the fish instantly. Then it liquefies
the fish with it’s acid urine.
Habitat
Roaming in the North Pole, the spider is a vagabond,
sleeping anywhere in it’s handmade hammock, made by it spinning a impenetrable
thread, which can hold 500 tonnes.
Closing
Sadly, the spider is an SEVERLY ENDANGERED SPECIES! With
only fewer than 100 left. Due to the loss of ice and illegal hunting of it’s
metal, this creature will be entirely extinct
by 2050. But with your support we can reduce our carbon footprint, stop
the loss and tackle the illegal trade of it’s metal.
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