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4 Hana's Work 18.03.13

The Monster

 

Clawed into a wooden wall tallies engraved in blood dripped into the infested and mouldy water. A merge of vomit and urine flowed past me as constant pitter-patters filled the eerie landscape. An intricate door handle stood before me smothered in crimson blood. What sinister figure lurked before me? I could nearly envisage the blood-curdling creature pierced with stab wounds and malicious glares.

 

I could almost feel the perilous breath gazing over me, taunting me again and again. I could smell fungified rodents crawling over its satanous body. These hallucinations will haunt me forever. My heart cannot take this any longer, I could feel death any minute.

 

It gives me shivers to have the feeling that devious eyes are fixated on me. How will I survive this dreadful havoc? If only I wasn’t so stupid to have listened to my friends.

3 Hana's Work 18.03.13

South Park Primary School

Seven Kings

Ilford, Essex

IG3 9HF

 

Wednesday 13^th March 2013

 

 

To the Minister of Education,

 

I am writing to express my feeling towards the elimination of SAT’s. I am a concerned 11 year old who is dissatisfied about the daily curriculum. I believe that SAT’s bring nothing but demotivation, deprivation and numerous losses of enthusiasm.

 

Surely you must agree, that children are much too young to be tested during their ‘thought to be’ childhood. This obligation mustn’t carry on, how would you feel? In contrary, high expectations create anxiety, pressure and fatigue. Also, statistics show that when tested, children aren’t able to showcase their exceptional abilities.

 

In addition, with many hindrances, children depart from primary school with an etched permanent lack of self-esteem. 80% of time is spent on boring English lessons and Mathematics per day! This extensive education does not provide an improvement to our learning. Burden on young shoulders, engraved nightmares, do you really want all this on your conscious?

 

Furthermore, this eviction is vital to all children in England. Statistics show that children in school in Sweden begin school at the age of 7, whereas British children begin at 3. Swedish children, however outperform us in GCSE’s with an average of 95%. As a result it is proven that with education mixed up with fun, children enjoy school and perform highly in class.

 

Overall, recent surveys show that children thrive when learning is fun! With various lessons, children become motivated and there is a major increase in both education and behaviour. I hope you take everything into account.

 

Yours Sincerely,

 

Hana Ismail.

0 Priyen's Work 18.03.13

  The Mangee

 

Eyes like flames pierced out in the semi-darkness. There was tormenting sounds that were haunting my delicate ear drums. The sewage water was cascading down the temple walls, the odours were lingering away in my nostrils. There were tally marks engraved deep down into the concrete walls. The merciless Mangee will tear you up limb by limb he will eat your raw flesh I could touch the sticky slimy walls .I got a taste of water it trickled down my face and into my mouth ugh it was disgusting it tastes like rotten corpes.

0 Mustafa's Work 18.03.13

 

 The Mangee

 

Vicious was the mangee monster; its ravenous claws sinking into the steady walls, the screams destroying my eardrum. Couragesly I tried to escape the blood-teeming scream. Subsequently, he could smell my juicy flesh, becoming more and more blood thirsty, as he was approaching his target, ME! While this ravenous chase, my heart pounded furiously. I must not forget that he is a impenetrable creature, as I looked back its scaly skin shone under the gems in the vast temple. When I looked into his blood-torch eyes, my blood froze like ice in the artic. I screamed for help wildly. The view was gaunt. Blood dripping from the ceiling covering the side walls. His horrendous breath was haunting me, my lungs were breathing bomb gases in, I couldn’t survive any more. It was a dead end when I was caught. My heart JUMPED as I saw the figure. The obnoxious smell killed my noise viciously. It was inevitable that he was going to eat me. In addition, going to chew my flesh! It was like my heart stopping every 1 minute. I tried to escape as there was blood on the floor. I’d hit my head. I was on the floor, saying goodbye to my body as I knew as I knew what the consequences were. The boiling blood rushed around my body, around 600km/h……

0 Kabir's Work 18.03.13

Green backed spider

 

How much do you know about the arachnid family? Taking its name from the leading scientist, Dr Lave this extraordinary arachnid now faces extinction. It is believed that this fascinating breed of spider is over 200 years old!

 

Where it lives

This special species lives in the wonders of the Amazon rainforest, between the hot climates of Argentina and Brazil. Here, temperatures can climb up to 50 Celsius. For this reason, the Green Backed spider can be found high up in the Trapeze tree, which are over 65m high.

 

What it looks like?

Covered with green and black stripes and an unusual pattern, the arachnid beast. It is so green it can camouflage in the tree. This is how it catches prey.

 

Why the spider is endangered?

This fantastic spider is on the brink of extinction. It is losing its home because people are chopping down the trees of the amazing Amazon rainforest.

 

By Kabir Floray

1 Lavanan's Work 18.03.13

      The Monster

 

Flash! Instantly paralyzed with fear, I fainted, with one glimpse of the monster itself. My frozen eyes began to thaw out, the eerie silence infected my ears. A repeated image of people I know strangled my mind, ‘don’t go there, where the monster lurks, don’t go down there where horror lurks,’ they had told me. I turned my head still lying on the floor like a prisoner by one single glance at that sinister creature. Was it a figment of my imagination?

 

“Hello, is anyone there?” I panicked with a sense of infinite dread within my soul. My voice echoed, piercing my own ear; I gasped in pain trying to cover my only working sense from my very own tenacious sound. Where was I? A wafting odour marched up my nostrils. I scrambled to my feet after the torture had ended. Thud! Thud! Isolated I might be, but I felt I wasn’t alone in this dungeon. My heart racing as my senses tormented me. A deafening scream filled the atmosphere surrounding me. I wasn’t the cause…

 

It came forward, I felt its dragon breath. I reached for my flashlight with struggle. Glaring painfully bright eyes fixated on me, I thought my fate was sealed. It had something in its mouth, a skeleton, a human skeleton, a past victim. A roar filled the ghastly tunnel, as loud as a meteor crash. Was this the end was it over for me? All my goals I wanted to accomplish dripped away like my trickling sweat. “My family!” A white arena appeared in front of me, signalling my death… 

 

1 Kajaani's Work 18.03.13

Heaven!!!!

 

Salty scents hang in the air, wafting further on, invading the fresh stifling air, in the Caribbean. Repeatedly somersaulting, the waves refused to roll contently on to the damp golden sand. Birds and creatures, didn’t enjoy the beating rays of the glowing sun. Still as can be, the waves did not accept the greeting of the dry sand, ready to be cooled.

 

0 Ismail's Work 18.03.13

Dear Harriet,

 

I am writing to you to explain about this irresponsible accident which had happened recently. Firstly, I would like to inform you that this was a complete mistake. It isn’t what you think it is I didn’t do it. Well on the other hand I did do it. But it was an accident I swear on my mother’s life. Why would I even attended to do something as ungrateful as this. I know you might be thinking why did this even take place well let me tell you that.

2 Inaya's Work 18.03.13

THE GREEN BACKED SPIDER!!!!

As you are aware of this recent discovery, scientist Laura is awe of this unearthed creature which has been found. This miraculous and rear Green Backed Spider, has been here on earth from a Jurassic period of time.

 

What it looks like:

The Green Backed Spider has the ability to camouflage into the tree because of its green aluminium back. This ancient spider is impenetrable and very poisonous. It has long skinny legs with deathly spikes which can kill. If it spitted its poison into your eyes it will murder you in instants.

 

Where it lives: 

In addition, the Green Backed Spider lives in the deadly tropical Amazon rainforest between Brazil and Argentina. Its habitat is on the Tropicana tree which is 6m tall and 12m wide. The spider loves it there because of its emerald green, silky and luscious leaves.

 

Why Green backed spider are endangered:

Furthermore, the value of the spider is astronomical which is up to a thousand pounds. To salvage this spider the deforestation must STOP!

With the trees being cut off their food will decrease and they will have nowhere to live. If they don’t have anywhere to live then they might come into the roads and houses and distract people. Cutting off the trees will create a huge effect to our oxygen we breathe in. It’s on the brink of extinction.

 

What it eats:

Moreover, it mostly eats stuff of the Tropicana tree like red ants oil from the saps, fruits from the Tropicana tree and the fresh, luscious, juicy leaves from the tree.

 

In conclusion, why let them suffer this way and cut off their home? Since this discovery has been made a herd of organisation criminals have descended on to the Amazon. 

0 Illaha's Work 18.03.13

 

Murder

Horror-struck the gates of Glamis Castle as king Duncan was found brutally stabbed to death. During the early hours of the morning at around 2 to 3 o’clock. This morning when Macbeth, Thane of Cawdor, and Lady Macbeth woke up to see that his dear cousin dead they were thoroughly shocked.

Macbeth immediately killed the two grooms who were standing outside King Duncan’s bedchamber as they were seared in blood. “I heard voices a man’s voice as well as a woman’s!” exclaimed a servant who was trespassing the hallways of Glamis Castle at that time of murder.

Lady Macbeth has stated that King Duncan’s two sons Malcolm and Donalbain had to be connected to the murder as they have fled from the country as soon as they found out about the murder of our beloved King spread.

When Macbeth entered his cousin’s bedchamber it was like seeing our king in a blood bath as he had been stabbed so cruelly. Now that the King is dead and his sons have fled who is going to be crowned as our new King of Scotland? Is it going to be Macbeth and are we ever going find out who is behind all this?

1 Hazna's Work 18.03.13

THE MONSTER!!!

 

An outline of a huge dew-drop covered with running slime continuously down like a wave going downwards. Raser-sharp claws full of dreadful venom, his eyes pierced at me like they have caught a fire in them. Although it was far away from me, I could feel its fearful odour invading my nostrils. Shrieking and crying was in my head, seeing him was a huge threat.

 

My own breath was touching me, it felt like it was trying to grab my flesh and devour into me then…

AHH!!! I found myself screaming in my bed with my dad pulling me but then all of a sudden my dad disappeared and there I heard a slight crack from the ground…

0 Hareez's Work 18.03.13

To use VCOP and

Descriptive Language

 

 

The continuous howls of the monster echoed throughout the night. My hands lead the way acting as my eyes, due to the power outage caused after the sinister screech of the Mangee, there was no light…no light except from the beams of light making its way down the endless, narrow corridors, quickly. I soon adjusted to the light and my now blank face, becoming paler by the second. Back home rumours were spread that the creature is demented with a vaulting but cunning smirk placed along his chin. Contrary to that, they say his colossal hands with dagger-like nails can tear you apart in an instance. Nevertheless, his bloodcurdling shriek that plays with your mind, that makes you cry and panic and makes you dizzy. BUMP! I was back in reality and had banged my head on the stone cold granite wall that stood before me. Blood gushed out and I now noticed the words ‘REST IN PEACE’ engraved in to the granite wall. RRRR…RRRR… I turned 360 degrees and standing there, blood dribbling down his face and eyes, vicious and fixated on me, stood the malicious blood hound, The Mangee….

 

 

                                             Hareez Rehman

                                                          Eiger.

0 Georgia's Work 18.03.13

HOWL

 

 

Shaking, my petrified body was tortured with tormenting fear. As I heroically attempted to turn the corroded, ice-cold handle, a bead of damp sweat slowly trickled down my red hot neck. It was here. It was coming for ME!

 

As frightened as a coward, I entered the deserted corps infected crypt. Gradually, my shadow became more and more and more diminiture against the hidden light, which flickered eerily from my wax candle. Suddenly, a shadowy figure towered over my fragile body.

 

 

Goose bumps invaded my body. Would I be this blood firsty Ville, viscous beast’s next helpless victim? As the beast came closer and closer and closer there was a slight breeze coming from the window.

 

 

Suddenly, as the beast approached me more and the breeze got heavier causing the wax candle to blow out……..

 

 

THE END!

0 Awais' Work 18.03.13

Record Breaker!!!!!

Last week, an incredible boy named Johnny Malik (aged 10) broke the world record for building the biggest mansion made out of sand!!!

This thrilling event took place in South America.

This generous boy is giving £500,000 to people in  

need!

 

This thoughtful child who is studying sates still fund the time to achieve this event. This amazing child exclaimed “I will carry on

My creations to help people in need and I cannot wait until my next accomplishment”. This boy has a natural talent hidden deep

Inside he and he is using this talent to help people in need. but the main question is what will he do next?

 

This boy has inspired mane people in the world I hope he will

 Care on his path to help people in need.

3 Femi's Work 18.03.13

 

Chasing Money

 

 

Using her pink fluffy phone, Charlotte rambled constantly. Her mouth was like numbers, NEVER ENDING! Whilst in the park, she unfortunately met David, the class geek, who was like usual carrying out an experiment ; even though he was banned, his last  test resulted in half the grass getting burned.Anyway,today was very special because as David was setting up the equipment he saw a smartly designed suitcase unattended lying on the floor. Curious, he opened it.His eyes lit up! Beads of sweat ravaged down his neck! Then his mouth went dry.                                                                                                                                         “CHARLOTTE!”                                                                                                                                                                             Covering her phone, she replied                                                                                                                                “What do you want Dorky David!”                                                                                                               Pointing at the suitcase, he stuttered                                                                                                                            “There’s money…MONEY! 500 grand!”                                                                                                                    Her mouth dropped and her eyes twitched                                                                                                                      “Did you say 500 grand 500 GRAND! Im rich, rich I tell you”                                                                                    “Your rich but I found the money, plus we have the return to the police”                                             spoke David like a girl scout.                                                                                                                                      “SHUT UP AND BE A MAN! Freak” yelled Charlotte.                                                                                                 Being red, her eyes stopped David dead as she snatched the case away.                                                                                                                                                                           

 

 

 

   

2 Amna's Work 18.03.13

Write a missing chapter!

 

The following day Bradley jumped in excitement for it was D-day! He couldn’t wait until they got on the coach and arrived in the Science Museum. Pushing everyone, Bradley hurried towards Mrs Ebbel. ”When are we going? “Bradley shouted, stomping his feet until the floor shook. But Mrs Ebbel paid no attention to Bradley and did a headcount instead. Behind him Jeff and his friends. Immediately, Jeff and his friends started to whisper and then Bradley overheard their conversation and soon his face gradually became a brighter shade of red. Mortified, Bradley darted out of his seat then his eyes fitted at Jeff. Jeff approached him, and pushed his fist in front of Bradley’s chest. BANG! Bradley double overed but quickly backfired with the same action whilst Mrs Ebbel was glaring at him. Brian, Jeff, Robbie and Andy pushed and told Mrs Ebbel one of the biggest lie ever. It began by Jeff...”Mrs Ebbel, Bradley punched me! All we were doing were talking secretly. You should tell him to go to the principal’s office.“Why? “answered Mrs Ebbel

“Because” “NO any way you are NOT going to the science museum I’m sorry!”

Bradley went back in distraught into Carla’s office but she did not seem to be there!

By Amna

1 Amber's Work 18.03.13

The Monster

 

 

 

Unaware of what lay ahead. I stopped, breathing fast. I THOUGHT I WOULD NEVER GET OUT, NEVER see my parents and eventually DIE! Still using (my now covered in slime) hands, I prayed that someone would hear my crying voice however large this cave was. Isolated, in this eerie cave, my heart pounding, I felt as if someone had walked over my grave! Dark black figures watching my every move. Is this a dream? In this gloomy calamity, I awaited my unforgettable death. Flashbacks reminding me of the good times but then a tenacious sound disrupted me.

 

Jumping I dared not to look behind as I realised death was close! Running would just make the creature more angry so I lay down and let the creature take me…

1 Aleena's Work 18.03.13

The Mangee

 

As the sweltering drops of blood splashed at my face, I quivered. The blades of a knives blade made me feel apprehensive. Above the ceiling laid cob webs all around me. Until, a big loud bang screeched at my face as if an alarming lion rawed at a ferocious tiger. I could smell his breath it was like a rotten egg poured with expired milk which was completely out of date. I was reluctant to see him.

 

There it was. Its body...

5 Yameen's Work 11.03.13

The Monster

 

 

Save me written in blood casted on the walls but now I was reluctant to move forward, not knowing what horror lay ahead of me. Isolated, I still made the decision to furtively sneak forward .Half of me wanted me to fall back although the other was eager to unravel all these mysteries. Consequently, by making the decision, I saw what no man will ever want to see. Dead bodies, the blood was dried up, their clothes were ripped and scars covered their bodies like a blanket. Looked more like zombies to me. With the zombies putting me off I crept forward. AHH! It echoed through the tunnel as I tripped over the dead bodies. Getting up, I started to dread being here. I felt like somebody had their eyes fixed on me, I looked right, left, behind and up. I saw something. Run, Run, Run. I said in my head. So I did but then I reached a dead end .Turned then saw the beady yellow eyes…

6 Zara H's Work 11.03.13

The Monster

 

As my eyes adjusted to the darkness, I let out a blood-curdling shriek. In front of me lay a … mouse?  I let out a huge sigh of relief. I had been imagining it! As I walked further through the pitch black caves, I had a strange feeling someone’s eyes were fixated on my back. I took a few steps forward and then almost immediately turned around. My eyes met a horrifying scene. Once again I let out a blood-curdling scream. In front of me was a monstrous monster!!! With blood dripping from its lips, it was clear it wanted to annihilate me. My legs turned to jelly. It roared louder than an erupting volcano and a pride of lions put together, spraying me with mucus and snot. I collapsed in a shivering heap while my life flashed before my eyes. I was only 11 years old! There were so many things I wanted to do before I grew up. But it was too late to turn back now…!!!

 

 

The horrifying beast grasped me in its slimy gigantic hands and raised his hand so we were now face to face. “Tom! Tom! Wake up!” exclaimed a voice.

“Huh?” mumbled Tom, puzzled by the familiar voice. One minute, a monster was about to ea

1 Sumeyya's Work 11.03.13

Charity choice….

 

Dear fellow people,

I am here to inform you to do something significant for the world. Do you want to save an animal which is suffering and may be gone for ever?

 

The panda is in constant fear of being extinct! If you deprive its bamboos (food), it will be ravenous and die of hunger! A numerous number of pandas are diminishing in China. Already us humans made the dodo (a type of bird) Extinct! Do you want another specious of animals to leave us? 98% of pandas are dying every year and vital behaviour is done. Statistic show that this company has helped pandas since 2009. Is it necessary to cut down millions of bamboos, because generations later the, children of the future would not know what a panda looks like other than a picture.  We have the luxury to eat whatever we want and they don’t.

 

If you do this good deed, you will receive a cute cuddly panda toy and adoption pack. So please, use this life time opportunity wisely and vote for the company. Its only £1 a month. The pandas are decreasing in the world, mainly in China…

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0 Selma's Work 11.03.13

            The Green Backed Spider

 

 

Have you ever heard about the Green Backed Spider? If not, you have come to the right place. Recently, a scientist has discovered a strange looking spider, which has been around since the Jurassic period. It has been confirmed that there are not many of them left, which means they are very close to becoming extinct.

 

The Green Backed Spider has black 8 legs; all of which are black and green stripes. If you ever discover a Green Backed Spider, beware, as it is not used to humans. Its back is a form of metal known as aluminium. Its colour tone is magical, you wouldn’t know as it camouflages in the green luscious tree. If you ever get to close it, even a meter, it automatically spits out poison to your eyes.

 

Moreover, the green Backed spider lives in the Amazon rainforest. Its favourite tree is called the ‘Trapeze tree’. The Trapeze tree is the Green Backed spiders’ favourite tree, which is known to it as its home. The Trapeze tree is 20m tall and it diameter is 15m.WOW!

 

However, the Green Backed Spider is a herbivore, who eats fruits as well as leaves. These fruits that belong to the Green Backed Spider are called ‘swush’, they are red just like a tomato but a swush has black dots.

 

Since this discovery has been made a herd of organised criminal have desended to the Amazon Rainforest in search of the Green Backed Spider. It’s value is astronomical because of the spinning web. Also, the Trapeze tree have been cut off for its mouth-watering swush and beautiful leaves.

 

We need to make sure that we contribute and inform others for the benefit of this creature. With your support and encouragement we can prevent this happening. To salvage the spider the race must insure that we should plant at least 4 more Trapeze tree in replace of one.

 

      

 

0 Kirandeep's Work 11.03.13

MURDER MYSTERY

 

Last night, King Duncan was savagely stabbed to death by a cruel unknown person!

The horrific scene took place at Glamis castle and there lay the King in a blood bath.

 

The murder remains a mystery as no-one knows the person responsible or their motivation. Macbeth said, “As soon as I saw the guards smeared with blood, clutching bloody daggers in their hands, I killed them immediately! I can’t believe they killed my most favourite cousin! I just lost my temper!

Lady Macbeth stated that if his sons had run away, then ‘they’ would have something to do with the death. It has been said that a guard had heard a woman‘s voice along with a man’s voice. Rumours have been said that Macbeth and his wife were involved in this sudden death.

 

Is the murderer still lurking around the castle?  Did King Duncan’s sons really kill him or was Macbeth and the grooms involved in this? Who will be the next VICTAM!

W3HO IS THE MUDERER? 

0 Mustafa's Work 11.03.13

THE MONSTER

The repulsive monster, sleeping in his muddy bed it woke up with a loud roar. I could see the creature scratching the granite walls with bloody claws, showing its brawny strength. Its target was me, an innocent boy. My heart pounded furiously, hoping for life, as I made a huge leap towards the beam of light. Bang! Bang! Bang! It toward me as I ran. My legs determined to run faster while it was no good. Even though I was small, it thought of me as a big feast, as I could smell the hunger from the beast. The ogary smell attacked my nostril with full power, my nose losing and forfeiting the battle. As I observed the dead end, I had a dreadful heart attack. I felt a dead breath behind me. I dared not to but I couldn’t stop myself. I glanced into his flesh, blood-full eyes. All of a sudden, I felt I was above 6-foot high. I was hung. Quickly I leaped of but he still caught me….  My eardrum hurting when it screamed. I gave a blood-curdling shiver. I punched it with furry…..