=>3500 Eiger: Mustafa's Work 11.03.13

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Monday 11 March 2013

0 Mustafa's Work 11.03.13


THE MONSTER



The repulsive monster, sleeping in his muddy bed it woke up with a loud roar. I could see the creature scratching the granite walls with bloody claws, showing its brawny strength. Its target was me, an innocent boy. My heart pounded furiously, hoping for life, as I made a huge leap towards the beam of light. Bang! Bang! Bang! It toward me as I ran. My legs determined to run faster while it was no good. Even though I was small, it thought of me as a big feast, as I could smell the hunger from the beast. The ogary smell attacked my nostril with full power, my nose losing and forfeiting the battle. As I observed the dead end, I had a dreadful heart attack. I felt a dead breath behind me. I dared not to but I couldn’t stop myself. I glanced into his flesh, blood-full eyes. All of a sudden, I felt I was above 6-foot high. I was hung. Quickly I leaped of but he still caught me….  My eardrum hurting when it screamed. I gave a blood-curdling shiver. I punched it with furry…..

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