Write a missing chapter!
The following day Bradley jumped in excitement for it was
D-day! He couldn’t wait until they got on the coach and arrived in the Science
Museum. Pushing everyone, Bradley hurried towards Mrs Ebbel. ”When are we
going? “Bradley shouted, stomping his feet until the floor shook. But Mrs Ebbel
paid no attention to Bradley and did a headcount instead. Behind him Jeff and
his friends. Immediately, Jeff and his friends started to whisper and then
Bradley overheard their conversation and soon his face gradually became a
brighter shade of red. Mortified, Bradley darted out of his seat then his eyes
fitted at Jeff. Jeff approached him, and pushed his fist in front of Bradley’s
chest. BANG! Bradley double overed but quickly backfired with the same action
whilst Mrs Ebbel was glaring at him. Brian, Jeff, Robbie and Andy pushed and
told Mrs Ebbel one of the biggest lie ever. It began by Jeff...”Mrs Ebbel,
Bradley punched me! All we were doing were talking secretly. You should tell
him to go to the principal’s office.“Why? “answered Mrs Ebbel
“Because” “NO any way you are NOT going to the science
museum I’m sorry!”
Bradley went back in distraught into Carla’s office but
she did not seem to be there!
By Amna
Well done Amna! You used good words like distraught and approached. There is nothing to improve.
ReplyDeletegood you added good words and included a lot of punctuation which is good.
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