=>3500 Eiger: Ali's Work 04.03.13

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Monday 4 March 2013

1 Ali's Work 04.03.13




 

 

Dear diary,

 

I can’t believe what a disgraceful thing I’ve

done! I have murdered my own blood. King Duncan had been brutally killed by me, his own

Cousin. I am emotionally drained with regret.

I wish to die myself after committing such an
unforgivable sin. Why did I listen to the witches prophecy and lady Macbeth? Why?

 

When my dagger travelled into the king’s stomach my whole body froze with fright.

I am treated as a filthy old man by the people of

Scotland. Everyone wants me dead. Have I become that greedy to kill a member of my family just to be on the throne? I’m consumed

With guilt and fear, I find it difficult to sleep when I think about that treacherous moment when my cousin’s body was smeared all over with blood. I always get the feeling that I’m being haunted by my cousins ghost.  

 

 

 

 

1 comment:

  1. * Well done ali you have uased good vocabulary
    *also you have explained about how you killed the king
    (Wish) you have to many of ! everywhere and question marks

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