=>3500 Eiger: Kajaani's Work 18.03.13

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Monday 18 March 2013

1 Kajaani's Work 18.03.13


Heaven!!!!

 

Salty scents hang in the air, wafting further on, invading the fresh stifling air, in the Caribbean. Repeatedly somersaulting, the waves refused to roll contently on to the damp golden sand. Birds and creatures, didn’t enjoy the beating rays of the glowing sun. Still as can be, the waves did not accept the greeting of the dry sand, ready to be cooled.

 

1 comment:

  1. star - good use of vocabulary
    wish - could make it a bit longer

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