=>3500 Eiger: Georgia's Work 18.03.13

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Monday 18 March 2013

0 Georgia's Work 18.03.13


 

 

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Shaking, my petrified body was tortured with tormenting fear. As I heroically attempted to turn the corroded, ice-cold handle, a bead of damp sweat slowly trickled down my red hot neck. It was here. It was coming for ME!

 

As frightened as a coward, I entered the deserted corps infected crypt. Gradually, my shadow became more and more and more diminiture against the hidden light, which flickered eerily from my wax candle. Suddenly, a shadowy figure towered over my fragile body.

 

 

Goose bumps invaded my body. Would I be this blood firsty Ville, viscous beast’s next helpless victim? As the beast came closer and closer and closer there was a slight breeze coming from the window.

 

 

Suddenly, as the beast approached me more and the breeze got heavier causing the wax candle to blow out……..

 

 

THE END!

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