Eiger: Aleena's Work 18.03.13

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Monday 18 March 2013

1 Aleena's Work 18.03.13

The Mangee

As the sweltering drops of blood splashed at my face, I quivered. The blades of a knives blade made me feel apprehensive. Above the ceiling laid cob webs all around me. Until, a big loud bang screeched at my face as if an alarming lion rawed at a ferocious tiger. I could smell his breath it was like a rotten egg poured with expired milk which was completely out of date. I was reluctant to see him.

There it was. Its body...