THE
GREEN BACKED SPIDER!!!!
As
you are aware of this recent discovery, scientist Laura is awe of this
unearthed creature which has been found. This miraculous and rear Green Backed
Spider, has been here on earth from a Jurassic period of time.
What it looks like:
The
Green Backed Spider has the ability to camouflage into the tree because of its
green aluminium back. This ancient spider is impenetrable and very poisonous.
It has long skinny legs with deathly spikes which can kill. If it spitted its
poison into your eyes it will murder you in instants.
Where it lives:
In
addition, the Green Backed Spider lives in the deadly tropical Amazon
rainforest between Brazil and Argentina. Its habitat is on the Tropicana tree
which is 6m tall and 12m wide. The spider loves it there because of its emerald
green, silky and luscious leaves.
Why Green backed
spider are endangered:
Furthermore,
the value of the spider is astronomical which is up to a thousand pounds. To
salvage this spider the deforestation must STOP!
With
the trees being cut off their food will decrease and they will have nowhere to
live. If they don’t have anywhere to live then they might come into the roads
and houses and distract people. Cutting off the trees will create a huge effect
to our oxygen we breathe in. It’s on the brink of extinction.
What it eats:
Moreover,
it mostly eats stuff of the Tropicana tree like red ants oil from the saps,
fruits from the Tropicana tree and the fresh, luscious, juicy leaves from the
tree.
In
conclusion, why let them suffer this way and cut off their home? Since this
discovery has been made a herd of organisation criminals have descended on to
the Amazon.
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