A
poem of a volcano.
Sleeping
calmly in the mist,
Slowly
awaking in the dawn,
Losing
its temper it tries to kill,
Spitting
out chunks of lava,
Leaving
the ground all hot and dry,
Burping
out more and more,
Of
the horrifying holtava!
Colossal
and terribrut lava cover the ground,
Looking
for its prey here and there,
Seeing
nothing but smoky ash,
Going
to explode full of menange,
It gets LOUDER,LOUDER,LOUDER and then,
BOOM!WHOOSH!DOOM!
Molten lava destroy everything like a big
sinister snake,
It achieves its prey and leaves the ground,
Infuriately it devours in,
Finally it has finished vomiting,
Nothing but left on the ground was scorching
red lava as hot as summer,
The lavas a hot burning sun,
One of life’s biggest enemy’s, It tranquilly goes back
to sleep, Snoring like a tired ba
You described the the lava like scorching red and you used lots of similies
ReplyDeleteYou have many brilliant words for example colosal and teribrut also descriptions on how it irups
ReplyDeleteWell done Hazna!You used a simile (Molten lava destroy everything like a big sinister snake) and a metaphor (Losing it's temper it tries to kill). Good work!
ReplyDeleteI like when you say Sleeping calmly in the mist,
ReplyDeleteChilling out full of warmth,
Slowly awaking in the dawn,
Losing its temper it tries to kill,
Spitting out chunks of lava,becouse it carm then its angery.
Wow! A lot of vcop included and lots of adjectives!It sounds great!
ReplyDeletei like this work because it describes loads of atmasfear.
ReplyDeleteexcelent work hasna you used loads of vcop and adjectives it sopunded really good all together
ReplyDeletei like how you had lots of temper and kiling
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