Eiger: Inaya's Work 11.03.13

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Monday 11 March 2013

1 Inaya's Work 11.03.13

THE MONSTER!!!

SLOWLY, SLOWLY, SLOWLY!!!

There in front of me was a towering figure lurking behind the granite walls. The repulsive shadow was humungous with the red piercing eyes concentrating on me. Was this a figment of my imagination?

I could hear and smell the revolting breath invading my nose. I dared not to look back in case his eyes gets fixated on me.

However, the vicious, ghastly beast was tormenting me. I shivered as I heard the obscene sound as he was screeching against the ancient wall, I had to take shelter for my ears or I’ll go deaf.

Furthermore, I had no control of my legs they were like jelly as I was so petrified. Was this my last breath? It was blood thirsty like a lion trying to catch its prey.