The Eiger (3,970 m (13,025 ft)) is a mountain in the Bernese Alps in Switzerland
Wednesday, 7 November 2012
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The Eiger (3,970 m (13,025 ft)) is a mountain in the Bernese Alps in Switzerland
My hands were cold. Shivering cold. I stumbled upon the steep, craggy mountains,hoping that broken legs would not be the end of me. Misty, white snow covered the mountain, gleaming gently like magic dust. The situation was an enigma as it battled between hope and trust. Emotions swelled up within me; was the man a bilk or was it my thoughts that pushed me into this. I carried on. Rocks tumbled in circles around the edges of the mountains however I took no notice. My only concern was to get to the top of the mountain.
ReplyDeleteMr Ahmed I did not get to finish it. Is it good?WHAT COULD I HAVE DONE TO MAKE IT BETTER?
ReplyDeleteMy hands were cold. Shivering cold. I stumbled upon the steep, craggy mountains,hoping that broken legs would not be the end of me. Misty, white snow covered the mountain, gleaming gently like magic dust. The situation was an enigma as it battled between hope and trust. Emotions swelled up within me; was the man a bilk or was it my thoughts that pushed me into this. I carried on. Rocks tumbled in circles around the edges of the mountains however I took no notice. My only concern was to get to the top of the mountain.
ReplyDeleteAmal, well done for having a go! Great adjectives and description!
DeleteWhere is the description of the monster?
How did you defeat the monster?
If it takes too long to type here, type it on word and copy and paste it here when you are done!
Goodluck. Looking forward to reading the edited version Amal.
Mr Ahmed I promise i did not publish it twice.But do i have to do an edited version anD the description of the monster.
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