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Wednesday, 21 November 2012

1 Class Poem

The snowflakes fall like a clumsy ballerina,
Crunching snow falling gently glistening like crystal diamonds and chains of silver.
Masquerading like a white mask,
As snow showers down on to earth it covers up everything.
As they reach the ground they accomplish little children, uncompleted wishes.

( Selma, Vinay, Bilaal, Isma )

Under winter's piercing glare,
Blankets of trees are ever so bare,
Glistening diamonds drift from the sky,
Choosing an option of where to lie.
Sheets of snow cover the ground,
From tree to tree squirrels bound.
All the children happily play,
Forgetting about their old grey days.

( Amber, Femi, Kajaani, Zara H )

Slowly, the ice cold snow drifting down like a crystal blanket,
Covering the earth.
Children jumping up and down around the freezing snow like ballerina's.

( Awais, Kabir, Haroon, Ibrahim, Zara K )

Waking up to a world of glistening light,
Gentle snow diving from the placid sky,
As a crisp sheet of soft snow drifting down from the blue sky,
Furtively flake by flake it arrives.
Snow, as gentle as tissue,
Touching every single thing in his way,
As soft as foam,
And as placid as the sea,
Like a velvet white carpet,
The snow hanging on trees.

( Mustafa, Priyen, Hareez, Anisah, Kirandeep, Illaha )

Frozen diamons flittering down,
A blanket of white, she covers the ground,
She falls like an angel everywhere,
Gleaming away, leaving soft sparkles here and there.
As she falls down people come out to watch this amazing sight,
Invading the grass day and night,
Gently stepping down she glitters with silver and gold,
She comes only once a year so embrace the cold.

( Amna, Inaya, Ali, Sumeyya, Hazna, Ismail, Aleena )

Soaring throughout daybreak,
Glistening through night,
Summer was destroyed,
And so was light!
Like a mask covering the land,
All the children play hand in hand.
The sun gazing from vacation,
The sun is proud and so's the nation.

( Yameen, Lavanan, Hasnaat, Hana )

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