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great editing
ReplyDeletebrilliant vcop
wish: use less of the name ali!!!!!
maybe use the petrified boy...
Or say the boy scared of (whatever he's scare of).Right?
DeleteGood constructive feedback Humaira
ReplyDeletei really liked all of them but i think good writers like u should think of better names then Ali Ali Ali Ali Ali but really good work
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ReplyDeleteGood work Safwan, I really liked how you describe Ali as petrified!!!!:D
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Deletegood work Tulsi!!!!!
ReplyDeletei dont think you should write that about yourself
Deletethats not very humble