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Excellent pieces of writing
ReplyDeleteMy writing is here isn't it good
ReplyDeletewow i loved Milan's wrting especially this sentence:
ReplyDeletein the abandoned, cracked house stood the one eyed, black haired mystery" !!!!!!!!! wow!!
Amazing work Milan!!!:D
ReplyDeleteYes it is Harsh, Good Work Everyone!
ReplyDeleteIs that you Milan?
Deletewow, it is so cool my piece of writing is on the website.wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI really cant stop looking at your work, keep it up :)!!!!
ReplyDeleteI adore Milans work, it just has to be you Milan. For me its a level 5!!!!!!!!!!(Love tour work)
ReplyDeleteSERIOUSLY MILAN WHY DOES YOUR WORK HAVE TO BE SO AMAZING, I REALLY LIKE THE SENTENCE:IN THE ABANDONED, CRACKED HOUSE STOOD THE ONE EYE BUT I REALLY LIKE ALL OF IT!!!!:)
ReplyDeleteExellent work Milan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI wish my handwriting was like yours
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