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Friday, 20 April 2012

Afra's writing
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10 comments:

  1. Nandinee20 April 2012 at 15:41

    that was really good!!!!!

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  2. Mr Ahmed20 April 2012 at 17:17

    Be clear. Which bit was nice?

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  3. Southparkpupil20 April 2012 at 17:40

    she has a good peace of writing

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  4. Mahnoor (Eiger)20 April 2012 at 19:10

    Star;Great wow words
    Star;Fantastic adjestives and writen in detail

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  5. Nandinee20 April 2012 at 19:18

    All of it...

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  6. laiba21 April 2012 at 19:22

    star:Alot Of Detail
    star:Great wow words and really good adjeactives

    i did not give u a wish cuz its too good

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  7. humaira23 April 2012 at 19:11

    you did lots of up levelling which makes it better!

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  8. Afra24 April 2012 at 16:28

    I know so thats good

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  9. Haneefa25 April 2012 at 14:47

    Great work afra!

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