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Wednesday 17 September 2014
Wednesday 23 July 2014
Tuesday 1 July 2014
3 Goodbye South Park Children!
Goodbye children of South Park Primary School. It has been a memorable 4years at this great school. I have taught some amazing children!
Ex-students please come and say goodbye. Would be wonderful to see you guys again! I am here till the 22nd July!
I am moving back to Newham (New City Primary School - in East ham/Plaistow) as Assistant Head.
Ex-students please come and say goodbye. Would be wonderful to see you guys again! I am here till the 22nd July!
I am moving back to Newham (New City Primary School - in East ham/Plaistow) as Assistant Head.
Wednesday 11 June 2014
0 PGL trip information
You have to be in school on Sunday 15th by 11:30am. Ensure that you have eaten a big breakfast as you will have dinner at around 6pm when you arrive. We suggest that you bring a snack and a drink to carry with you to eat at the centre. Furthermore, you will need to bring a suitcase (preferably on wheels) for all your equipment and clothes to carry. You are also suggested to bring a rucksack for any excess equipment.
On the journey, you are either driven on coach 1 or 2 - please remember which coach you were informed to board. You were also told which activity group you are in, along with the group leader you are with and people who will be accompanying and sharing a cabin with. You are expected to be in bed by 9pm and be asleep by 10pm, as you will wake up very early with a loud knock!
It is suggested to bring either an alarm clock or a watch to know what time to wake up or what time it currently is. You can also bring a disposable camera to capture the memories, however, nothing valuable, electrical of battery operated is aloud during the course of the 4 days. Please do not bring sprays or perfume apart from deodorants.
On the journey, you are either driven on coach 1 or 2 - please remember which coach you were informed to board. You were also told which activity group you are in, along with the group leader you are with and people who will be accompanying and sharing a cabin with. You are expected to be in bed by 9pm and be asleep by 10pm, as you will wake up very early with a loud knock!
It is suggested to bring either an alarm clock or a watch to know what time to wake up or what time it currently is. You can also bring a disposable camera to capture the memories, however, nothing valuable, electrical of battery operated is aloud during the course of the 4 days. Please do not bring sprays or perfume apart from deodorants.
Wednesday 23 April 2014
To my loyal friend Harriet,
I can no longer take these false accusations. Like you said, that malodorous vermin has framed me-no one believes me. I appreciate your time in writing to me; they blamed me for such a callous crime. Me and my family's reputation is tarnished because of that scorny Dumpstone.
Consequently, the demonic plan they concocted had become a success. I am living in isolation and humility is carrying a burden upon my shoulders. Surely you believe me, Harriet? Do you really think that I, your trusted friend, would do something so heinous to one who is so close to me? My integrity has never been questioned before! Do you really want to know the honest truth?
I find it very hard to tell my version of events as the pain is still very raw. Dumbledore had summoned me to the tower top and I followed, heart beating fast. Somehow I felt that someone's eyes were fixed upon me and piercing my skin(it might have been Dumpstone's!) My wand had slipped out so I knelt down to pick it up but then I heard a piercing scream. A vague figure was standing there sniggering with mischief. Dumbledore was gone! As far as I can remember, as soon as I turned, the crowd of shocked people were standing there in utter awe. Wafts of smoke and flames appeared and the looming figure swept away, disappearing into thin air. The event is still engraved in my head and a question is still unanswered... WHERE IS DUMBLEDORE????
From then on, everybody was staring at me, giving me looks that made me feel uncomfortable.
TO BE CONTINUED...
To write a
description of a setting
As the ancient, withered gate creaked open, there was a
sudden eerie silence. Who could it be? Why were they here?
The devouring beast, with claws of silver, ripped open the
sky in sudden anger, as the light flashed as if it was taking a picture, and hung
over the suffocating heat.
The tired, old redbrick chapel stood proudly in the old,
shallow and moist graveyard, as if it was showing that it was the master of the
evils.
The arched windows were walled, as if they were two hands
hiding their eyes, no longer wanting to see daylight.
The hazel white clouds wrapped themselves around the
glistening moon, as the dead trees swayed madly as if they were prisoners
wanting to be free.
The wind blew bitterly as the inky darkness surrounded.
Surreption crept all over.
The unknown figure could feel the fresh, chill anew along
its spine as it stared around and could see the maze of graves and the lofty
path of doom.
What will happen next….?
To write a description of a setting.
Underneath the blanket of dark, ominous clouds, the once
freshly built redbrick chapel stood in the middle of the eerie graveyard,
abandoned. Nestled in its corner, was an old wooden pew with a broken arm. Isolated, the mournful bell-tower stood in the distance eclipsing the skyline,
as the odor of decaying corpses invades the noses off passing pedestrians. In
the distance, vague whispers can be heard from the graves made of chiseled stone. Everything was still until the dark, black and devious looking crow
landed on the sky-scraping bell-tower. The slender oak tree stretched it’s arms
out wide. The fragrance of luscious green grass can be smelt people walk on the cobble
path that swirls through the cracked gravestones.
To write a description of a setting
Stood all alone, the old, ancient redbrick chapel stood
almost demolished as it echoed a wounded sound. The ominous clouds gathered, planning to devour the land. Suddenly, a razor flash of lightning zoomed
across the corner of his eye. Slowly, the door creaked, as the bell tower
mournfully stood as it looked at the land. The thick black smokey clouds were thick, menacing and portentous. The
almost broken grave stones was there, while blood dripped from the
corner of it. As an evil sound was in the distance, the clouds started to
appear gathering together as it started
to rain.
The Monster
Evil crimson eyes stared at me and I froze on the spot, my heart was pounding in my chest. Suddenly, my flash light started flickering and my hand began to tumble. Bravely, I looked back and I saw the savage beast towering over me. Blood was dripping from his mouth and I could hear something crunching in his razor sharp teeth. Could this be me next? I couldn't help thinking about my family. How could I be such a fool to get tricked by so-called friends again!
Wednesday 2nd
April 2014
Write a formal
persuasive letter
South Park
Primary School
Water
Lane
Ilford
IG3 9HF
To whom it
may concern,
As a
hardworking and conscientious student of South Park Primary
School. This letter is regarding the proposal to redevelop
the potential site on Water Lane. We, as citizens of
Redbridge, have many valid reasons for this particular
project,
Most
significantly, surely a person in your position of such high status
should understand that a high proportion of road
accidents involve children (A jaw dropping 70%)
Furthermore,
there has been a sharp increase accidents
involving pedestrians, due to children not having a
play area. (Children playing on their bikes and skateboards.)
Residents of the local community, whole-heartedly
believe converting the wasteland to a park is the utmost
priority! A recent survey has shown 4/5 parents are
not content in leaving their children on their own. 80% is a
far too great a number! How would you feel if your
child was placed in this predicament? In addition,
in the local vicinity there is a lack of outside space for
children (No parks, gardens and the local Schools have
no playing fields) undoubtedly, you don’t want to be
responsible for adding to the increasing rate of childhood
obesity in the UK. Statistics show that we are way ahead
compare to our European counterparts. To tackle this
problematic issue we must find an amicable resolution.
So make the right decision and convert this wasteland to
a park for our community. To support this argument, 60%
of children are continuously playing games and we must
not let children be exploited by excessive video games
and TV.A Park would give the children to burn their weight.
Most importantly, the local Park is a necessity
for all kinds of people. Research shows children perform
better in school if they are fit and healthy. Moreover, a
rising trend of 30% increase in the amount of Overweight
children in the past 5 years. Do you want to be responsible
for all this chaos?
To conclude,
residents are suffering from obesity as they are not fit
and healthy. They sit home all day either watching TV
and eating junk or playing video games.
Please listen to my opinion.
Yours sincerely
Umamah Choudhury
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