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Carrying on the argument
ReplyDeleteEmma:Mum won't let me go to town with my friends on Saturday!
Mum:I am sorry Emma but i think you are not that confident!
Dad:Come on Emma!I'll tell her to invite you another time then she can go with her other friends ok Emma?
Emma:but..but..
Mum:I'm sure she will invite you another time Emma!
Emma:but...why?
Dad:Your mum has loads of work to do!
Emma:But you have to understand dad and mum!I am so bored and i want to go to town with my friends!
Mum(whispering to dad):What should we do now?We can't just tell her. Emma thought about how much fun would she would have if she went to town,their mum and dad were thinking about all their work they had to do.
Mum-You got to understand dear!
Dad:You can't just have it your own way!
Emma:but..but..
Mum:but what?
Emma:I really want to go please?
After that no more happened but the argument was still going on until her friends already went to town!
the end
One day a man was counting the storeys of a building.
ReplyDeleteA woman said "Anyone who counts here is punished. How many floors have you counted?"
The man answered "Thirty".
"30 Yuan please," the woman said.
The man gave her 30 Yuan and thought "You fool, I counted 50 floors".
School Rules
ReplyDeleteGood day,a new pupil from south park primary school has joined us.We think she won't even have a clue about our school rules.If we don't tell her then there is a 46%chance of her being unusual.So i am going to introduce our new student which is named Roxy.Now,lets move on and i will introduce her to our school rules!
She look like a very good student and she doesn't look harsh at all.But,she might not be as good as we are expecting her so let me carry on and let me tell her the rules of the school.Firstly i will do our school rules telling you how our school should be like.
You should always look after property and never damage things due to the fact that it might have cost very expensive and if you do damage things then you have to pay for it Roxy!Secondly you always have to do your best like if you do it quickly that would be your spirit Roxy!And please don't waste time if you do then your name would be put in the warning chart.
I hope you learned about our school Roxy!!!
Mum : Emma has been invited to town wit.. ( dad interrupts )
ReplyDeleteDad : That's great, she's finally settled in.
( Mum Shouts )
Mum : You didnt let me finish! She is invited by Anna and Henna.
Emma : SO???
Dad : no no no no NO! Anna and Henna are two mean, greedy, rude and stupid girls! If you are under this roof, I shall not let you go to town with them.
Mum : Emma, dear, havent you heard about all the mischief they are up to? Last week they burgaled North Hill 94th Street Bank!!!!!
Emma : AND??
( olivia, emma's sister looks up from her magazine )
Olivia: They're going to influence you!! Catch up DUMBO!
Emma : No they aren't!
Dad : You are not going, end of conversation.
Emma : But dadd... you said I should fit in and I finally did!
( Olivia leaves the scene followed by Dad )
( Mum tuts and also the scene)
Emma : uuurghhhh! WHY do the only people I hang out with have to be burgalers?
Carrying on the argument:
ReplyDeleteEmma:I am so angry the ending won't finish!
Mum:You have been talking about this till day and night what are you on about?
Dad:Your giving me a headache Emma i am going to sleep.Don't disturb me ever again please!
Mum:We already told you Emma she can come this Saturday i am sure the days would come very quick isn't it dad?
(Dad wasn't answering mum because he was fast asleep with a big bad headache!)
(Mum sleeps to)
(Emma sleeps to!)
Narrator:Next day Emma acted so normal because it was saturday she was so glad to meet her friends!
Final scene carrying on in the Argument:
ReplyDeleteNarrator: Emma comes home and tells mum and dad about all her day.
Emma: Mum! I got news to tell you!
(Mum and dad comes down very quickly)
Mum: Yes Emma?
Emma:
Dad: Tell us Emma! We were very busy then we came downstairs just for you!
Mum: That’s right!
Emma:
Dad and Mum: Well, if you’re not going to tell us we will carry on what we were doing.
(Dad and Mum were about to go upstairs until...
Emma: Wait! I’ll tell you please!
(Mum and Dad comes again)
Dad: What do you want now?
Emma: I want something Dad
Mum: What?
Emma: I never met my friend due to the fact the party was cancelled all of it was cancelled.
Dad: Well, I am very angry of you i have a big headache now get out of my business room.
Mum: Emma, You should next time look dad is asleep again. Go to your room now!
Emma: I have better things to do like watch t.v!!
Ending of the Argument:
ReplyDeleteEmma:It doesn't matter now its cancelled
Mum:I know right?
Emma:Yes
Mum:Why where you moaning so much to me before huh?
Emma:Because i was angry and i didn't know it was cancelled!
Mum: Thats true but next time be good!
Emma: Ok!
Narrator: THE END.