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Wednesday 7 November 2012

5 SATS style writing activity


This is a SATs style activity. Please feel free to have a go. You can publish on the Blog or bring it in to me. Thanks.
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  1. amal2 December 2012 at 15:27

    My hands were cold. Shivering cold. I stumbled upon the steep, craggy mountains,hoping that broken legs would not be the end of me. Misty, white snow covered the mountain, gleaming gently like magic dust. The situation was an enigma as it battled between hope and trust. Emotions swelled up within me; was the man a bilk or was it my thoughts that pushed me into this. I carried on. Rocks tumbled in circles around the edges of the mountains however I took no notice. My only concern was to get to the top of the mountain.

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  2. amal2 December 2012 at 15:28

    Mr Ahmed I did not get to finish it. Is it good?WHAT COULD I HAVE DONE TO MAKE IT BETTER?

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  3. amal2 December 2012 at 15:28

    My hands were cold. Shivering cold. I stumbled upon the steep, craggy mountains,hoping that broken legs would not be the end of me. Misty, white snow covered the mountain, gleaming gently like magic dust. The situation was an enigma as it battled between hope and trust. Emotions swelled up within me; was the man a bilk or was it my thoughts that pushed me into this. I carried on. Rocks tumbled in circles around the edges of the mountains however I took no notice. My only concern was to get to the top of the mountain.

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    1. Mr Ahmed3 December 2012 at 16:56

      Amal, well done for having a go! Great adjectives and description!

      Where is the description of the monster?

      How did you defeat the monster?

      If it takes too long to type here, type it on word and copy and paste it here when you are done!

      Goodluck. Looking forward to reading the edited version Amal.

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  4. AMAL8 December 2012 at 20:27

    Mr Ahmed I promise i did not publish it twice.But do i have to do an edited version anD the description of the monster.

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