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Dear Santa,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Anna and I'd really appreciate it if you bought me the brand new Jacqueline book as all the girls are getting it and I don't want to be left out.
Also could you get me a pink watch because I get told off regularly for not coming to lessons on time, well Miss Jenkins is the only teacher but I really want to keep track of time.
I will prepare you milk and cookies for you and both the reindeer to enjoy. It will be left near the fireplace. Don't worry I will make sure that mum and dad don't light it so you don't come down burning yourself. That would be terrible. Wish you the safest journey Santa.
Love Anna xxx
P.S - Chocolate chip or plain chocolate biscuits?
Oliver - (angrily) Amy! Why would you pack all your stupid teddies you BABY!
ReplyDeleteAmy - (sobbing)I need them and they aren't stupid, MUM!!! OLIVER SAID I'M A BABY!!!
Mum - No time for arguing we have a holiday to go to! And Oliver apologise to your sister or you won't be getting pocket money.
Oliver - (shrieking) but Mum it's all Amy's fault.
(Mum leaves the scene tutting to both Amy and Oliver)
Oliver - Alright stupid, here's what we'll do, you put your baby things to this side ( points to right) and I'll put my cool things here(points to left) Deal?
Amy - OK, but don't call me stupid or I'll tear your Match Attax up and flush them down the toilet.
Oliver - (imitates Amy) Okay... Okay...
Dear Santa,
ReplyDeleteI have been a very good girl this year so I deserve lots of presents. I would like a new pair of trainers as the ones I have are broken and when I try to run in races all the boys laugh at me because I keep falling over. This is because my shoes are so worn out that the soles came off, causing me to fall over.
I would also like the new Jacqueline Wilson book, clean break, as I love reading and I have read all the Jacqueline Wilson books except for that one.
Your cookies and milk will be sitting on the table opposite the fireplace sitting in one of my mums precious china plates. Dont worry there will be enough for you, your reindeer's, your elves and there will be plenty to spare. Hope you can make it.
Love Anna xoxoxoxo
P.S You dont have to get me just those presents.You can get me more that that actually. Those are just the main things that I need.
You copied me with the idea about cookies!!!
DeleteSorry Hana!!! Anyway, I didnt copy you exactly...
ReplyDeleteTo Santa,
ReplyDeleteI am writing to you because i want to know what are you going to give me in Christmas. I want to know what you can get for me.
Happily Christmas is coming!I want people to get what they want especially me i want to get what i want.I really want to have a watch because it is very useful.Also i want to have a football because everyone thinks i am the best at football when i attend the football clubs,but i don't have a football at home.Further more i want to have a book,not just a book a book witch has loads of pages,and has lots of fun facts inside.Also books make your knowledge really good and i think my level will boost up.
Don't worry Santa!I'll give you a cake and a glass of milk when you go down the chimney.I know you will be really busy delivering all the presents but i hope i will get what i want!
Please appreciate my letter that i wrote to you,and i hope you have a good christmas!Merry christmas Santa and have a happy new year!!!
From Anna xoxoxoxo
The Holiday
ReplyDeleteOliver- Omg!I have loads of toys to take with me to the great holiday but what ones should i pick Amy?
Amy-You can pick the toys that are top quality like the drums you always play with that isn't it?
Oliver-Yeah i know but how would i carry the drums they are so big and my suitcase won't be that big!
Amy-OK good point,but you can basically have your football that you always play in the garden!
Oliver-Oh yeah i could!but who shall i play with?
Amy-you can play dribbling by your self you know how to because in class everyone calls you a fantastic footballer!
Oliver-I suppose so,I will do it bye my self!But one football are you serious Amy i need more than that right?
Amy-Yes you do now what about your chocolate coin maker?
Oliver-It will melt.
Amy-yes your right well just take some sweets out of your pocket
Oliver:All right then i will!
Mum-Its time to go to our Holiday!
Then Amy and Oliver went to Their holiday they were feeling very happy and exited then they arrived.
Amy-I forgot my toys because i was too busy giving you ideas for what to choose for our holiday!
Oliver-Tough luck!