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Tuesday 9 October 2012

4 Independent writing activity 2 9/10/12

Save Our Pond!

Your local wildlife pond is to be filled in so that a supermarket can be built on the land.
 



Your task is to write a letter to your local councillor arguing that the pond should be

kept for people to enjoy.


 

4 comments:

  1. Dear Councillor,
    I am writing to persuade you not to fill the wildlife pond and make a supermarket.I hope this will make you change your mind and hopefully you'll understand the effects that will happen.

    First of all, I think that it is a very quiet and peaceful area. Also, I think that this will effect animals that need the habitat to survive in which will not help children to learn about animals and adaptation.Futhermore, I think that women and men who go and have a walk will not have as much better time doing it.

    I hope this will effect you and make you change your mind.

    Yours Sincerely,
    Amal

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    1. Thank you Amal. Great letter! Can you extend your middle paragraph? Provide evidence!

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  2. Thank You Mr Ahmed for this writing activity. I will have a go at this at home.

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  3. i started to do my work and i realy love that work so i will do most i can

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