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Dear Councillor,
ReplyDeleteI am writing to persuade you not to fill the wildlife pond and make a supermarket.I hope this will make you change your mind and hopefully you'll understand the effects that will happen.
First of all, I think that it is a very quiet and peaceful area. Also, I think that this will effect animals that need the habitat to survive in which will not help children to learn about animals and adaptation.Futhermore, I think that women and men who go and have a walk will not have as much better time doing it.
I hope this will effect you and make you change your mind.
Yours Sincerely,
Amal
Thank you Amal. Great letter! Can you extend your middle paragraph? Provide evidence!
DeleteThank You Mr Ahmed for this writing activity. I will have a go at this at home.
ReplyDeletei started to do my work and i realy love that work so i will do most i can
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