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Friday 20 April 2012

Afra's writing

10 comments:

  1. that was really good!!!!!

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  2. Be clear. Which bit was nice?

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  3. Mahnoor (Eiger)20 April 2012 at 19:10

    Star;Great wow words
    Star;Fantastic adjestives and writen in detail

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  4. star:Alot Of Detail
    star:Great wow words and really good adjeactives

    i did not give u a wish cuz its too good

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  5. you did lots of up levelling which makes it better!

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  6. I know so thats good

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  7. Great work afra!

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